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Here it is. The next chapter in Matthew's Trial. There is so much happening in this chapter so I'm just going to try and an sum up my thought process on this chapter in as basic a format as possible. 

So now we all know Wilson's dirty little secret and why he has gone so far to get Jenna. I have to admit that I went through a lot of different ideas before finally settling on this one. And while I don't think that it's perfect in any way I do like the way that it ultimately plays out. Also now you all know what Sam is running from in those stories that I've written that take place after Matthew's Trial. And that little scene from chapter 4 where Jenna is talking to that one red headed girl who is named Elisa and I'm sure is not a reference to anything at all, is fully explained as is the fate of her Ampharos Bell who was only briefly mentioned in that chapter. Yes I know that it's a bit of a callback to a rather obscure scene but I like the way it draws everything together. 

I am...more than a little uncomfortable about how I wrote that scene with Matthew and Elizabeth. I have always been very nervous when writing the two of them and I have tried to be careful to keep them in character. And to be perfectly frank this has been the hardest scene with the two of them to write. After all I am moving outside of the established canon between the two while still trying to keep their personalities intact. So I would like some feedback if possible on what people think of that scene. 

Well there is only one more chapter to go and then the epilogue to the story which I don't know yet if I will count as a chapter or not because of how short it is. The 12th chapter is finished and I am just waiting for it to be edited and reviewed. When it's finished I'll post it. 

Also I would like to thank :iconaxel230: for his work in editing this chapter. I really appreciate the work that you put into it dude. You made the story sound so much more alive. 

Chapter 12: snowhawk7.deviantart.com/art/M…

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Sam and his Pokemon (c) Me 

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At last I was able to read this.

I don't know why Tobias didn't just say what it was XD vein all cryptic and shit hehe

Not a bad chapter at along Sammy